This term in year five our class is learning about poems and haiku is just one of them Haiku poems are made up of three lines. The first line is 5 syllables, the second line is 7 syllables and the last line is 5 syllables.
The Fright of Surfing
The waving water,
carving the ocean shining,
jumping off the wave
by Henry
Hi Henry,
I like how you wrote about something more scary and less of something that people can easily do. What is your favourite type of poetry.
From Charlie.
Hey Henry,
I like your haiku. I like how talked about being scared to surf not being exited. Good job.
-Millie